These are prrtty solid if you still want the oats and can find.them. https://www.cheerios.com/oat-crunch-cereals

Then we can go into the water

Dust in the wind?

It is my first, and I definitely had to read it twice to make sure that I understood. It is definitely not you, but the awkward way they worded the title.

Yours is much clearer, in my opinion.