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minus-squareMsPenguinette@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up8arrow-down1·3 days agoWait, I read the article and the headline is pretty much on point? What am I missing?
minus-squareTallonMetroid@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up13·3 days ago“Senator Elon Musk” is ambiguous phrasing. Obviously, what is meant is “Senator [that] Elon Musk”, but it could also have been calling Aparthiedman himself a senator.
minus-squareMr_Dr_Oink@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up5·2 days agoIt reads like a gardenpath sentence. For example (made up on the spot so excuse me if its crap) Muscle man made harms others when using force [Muscle that was made by man]
minus-squarexmunk@sh.itjust.workslinkfedilinkarrow-up13·edit-23 days agoElon Musk isn’t a Senator. The title as written reads that way by default. A that shoved in the middle would fix that.
minus-squareDarkassassin07@lemmy.calinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up6·edit-23 days ago Senator Elon Musk Called a ‘Traitor’ Gets Rid of His Tesla: Don’t Want a Car Built By An ‘A**hole’ This sounds like Elon is a Senator and was called a traitor; when it was actually Musk calling a Senator a traitor. Try: Senator, who was called a ‘Traitor’ by Elon Musk, Gets Rid of His Tesla: Don’t Want a Car Built By An ‘A**hole’
Wait, I read the article and the headline is pretty much on point? What am I missing?
“Senator Elon Musk” is ambiguous phrasing. Obviously, what is meant is “Senator [that] Elon Musk”, but it could also have been calling Aparthiedman himself a senator.
It reads like a gardenpath sentence.
For example (made up on the spot so excuse me if its crap)
Muscle man made harms others when using force
[Muscle that was made by man]
I like “The old man the ship”
Elon Musk isn’t a Senator. The title as written reads that way by default.
A
thatshoved in the middle would fix that.This sounds like Elon is a Senator and was called a traitor; when it was actually Musk calling a Senator a traitor.
Try: